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    Englisch Referat Hilfe

    Hey leute. muss morgen mein schriftliches referat für mein sprachmodul abgeben und musste türkische mit deutsche business etiketten vergleichen. würdet ihr bitte korrekturlesen und hilfestellungen/bzw verbesserungen abgeben., dnake im vorraus
    ps. das referat zählt wie ein praktikum




    Hello everybody, today we´re going to present you…

    Our presentation deals with the topic Turkish business etiquette…….

    Turkey is a country that lies on the axis of Asia and Europe and the most of the population are Muslims. Turkish culture is a blend of East and West and long holding of tradition. Business etiquette in Turkey is different than Western etiquette, especially the religious traditions.

    When you will make an appointment it´s necessary to do it at least one to two weeks in advance over the telephone and make sure that you do not arrange the meeting during the July or August, when most Turkish people take their vocation. Also be aware of important holidays like Ramadan, when most Turks will have a day off. In Germany it´s near the same of concerning time because German companies are very similar to Turkish companies.

    The next point I would like to mention is about the business dress. Turkish business dress is conservative. They take punctuality for business meetings very seriously and expect that you will do likewise. Men should wear a suit and tie, and woman should wear professional dress as well. In the summertime when it gets very hot, a shirt without a tie and slacks are acceptable, but never shorts for men. Woman should dress conservatively without exposing their arms or legs, or wearing tight-fitting clothing. In Germany it isn´t so demanding, it´s only important to be well- tended (gepflegt) and to be friendly. Additionally Turkish tradition and religion still have an influence on the business dress.

    Next I will tell you something about the gift giving in the Turkish business. Gift giving in Turkish culture is not necessary. They are too lavish and personal. Acceptable gifts for business are items for the office, e.g. quality pens, maybe with your company logo. In Germany it´s absolutely not a duty to bring a gift to business meetings but usually you do to represent your company in a good way.

    Now I hand over to Dennis, who would like to tell you something about the Dining.

    Thanks Dennis.
    Yes, the building of strong relations is very important in every business in the whole world. Turks prefer to do business with people they know and trust, so it is important for them to develop relationships with you over extended meals that are meant to be purely social at first. Turkish meals are meant for relaxing and engaging in good conversation. I think the fact to build strong relations is important to all business industries.

    #2
    hab jetzt keine lust alles zu lesen aber was mir spontan einfällt
    1. Kurzformen vermeiden
    2. ich hab im wirtschaftsenglisch unterricht gelernt das man eine kurze Übersicht über das Thema gibt und eine ungefähre zeitangabe macht

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      #3
      und das ding liest du dann ab?

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        #4
        besserer Einstieg plz...

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          #5
          das liest du dann 1zu1 ab oder wie?

          Verwende Worte wie "Moreover", "Additionally" und "Furthermore".
          Dann ists nicht blos solch eine Aneinanderreihung von "Fakten".

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            #6
            'we are going to present you' - solche Einstiegssätze kommen ganz schlecht rüber.
            ---> Google

            Turkey ... that is situated on ... and is mainly inhabited by Muslims. - wobei ich diese Fakten trennen würde

            Hmm, ich muss alles bemängeln. Vielleicht findet sich jemand, der dir hilft, aber ich werde das bestimmt nicht sein.

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              #7
              Zitat von p4rc van Bommel
              das liest du dann 1zu1 ab oder wie?

              Verwende Worte wie "Moreover", "Additionally" und "Furthermore".
              Dann ists nicht blos solch eine Aneinanderreihung von "Fakten".
              habe vergessen zu erwähnen dass es ein schriftliches referat ist, gebe es also so ab

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                #8
                Zitat von Raikoh
                Zitat von p4rc van Bommel
                das liest du dann 1zu1 ab oder wie?

                Verwende Worte wie "Moreover", "Additionally" und "Furthermore".
                Dann ists nicht blos solch eine Aneinanderreihung von "Fakten".
                habe vergessen zu erwähnen dass es ein schriftliches referat ist, gebe es also so ab
                dann lass den "ich gebe jetzt an dennis ab, der blablabla"-teil weg. :>

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                  #9
                  wenn es schriftlich ist, ist der ohnehin schon schlecht gewählte einstieg ultra fail
                  dennis musste dann wohl ja nicht extra erwähnen, einfach ohne solche übergänge meiden
                  vll kannst du ja noch versuchen das sprachlevel ein wenig zu heben, ala claire stanfield

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                    #10
                    hi i go make speech about turk => best possible start

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                      #11
                      ´ durch ' ersetzen

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                        #12
                        Turkey is a country that lies on the axis of Asia and Europe and the most of the population are Muslims
                        jesus :D

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                          #13
                          bist doch der laberer ausm ssb thread. scheinst ja ein richtig dämlicher dödel zu sein.

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                            #14
                            boa sorry, habs nur bis zum 2 dicken Absatz gelesen, rechtschreibfehler entdeckt

                            "vocation" statt vacation

                            "In Germany it´s near the same of concerning time because German companies are very similar to Turkish companies." raff ich gar nich. Glaub, das is bissl holprig

                            Merhzal von woman is women

                            "gift giving" sagt man das so als stehender Begriff in english?

                            das wars von mir

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                              #15
                              ...and the most of the population are Muslims... -> and most parts of the population consists of muslims.


                              The next point I would like to mention is about the business dress. -> The next thing I'd like to talk about is how you dress.

                              Next I will tell you something about the gift giving in the Turkish business. Gift giving in Turkish culture is not necessary. They are too lavish and personal. Acceptable gifts for business are items for the office, e.g. quality pens, maybe with your company logo. -> Now I'm going to tell you some kind of rules you should remember when gifting someone in a Turkish business. In the Turkish culture it is not necessecary to gift something, as most people consider those as too lavish and personal. If you want to gift something, give them something they can use in the office, for example a nice pen with your company logo printed on.


                              kp obs gut is, kann vllt nochmal nen anderer drüber gucken

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