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    #46
    ich misbrauche den fred mal xD

    bin der totale noob in englisch, schreibe viel denglisc ... wo sind da gramm. fehler im text

    The movie „finding forrester“ is about the 16-year-old afro american jamal wallace, who os taking part in a private school and is confronted with prejudice against him. While in school he helps old author William forrester, who lifes in an apartment in the Bronx , to find the way back to live.

    In the movie jamal is often confronted with racism like Jefferson in a lesson before dying. In Professor Crawford, jamals teacher in his private school, opinion a black guy like jamal can not be so intelligent to be in a private school.
    Solely because jamal is from the Bronx his teacher face him with racism. In the same way Claire, who is white girl and friend of jamal, dad does not want that Claire and jamal are friends. He does not want to kiss each other or they converge.
    However the movie verify that a white guy and a black guy can be friends. William Forrester and Jamal share the same intrest in reading and writing books. These two people accept, tolerate and
    respect each other. Moreover the importance of education is part oft he movie. For jamal its harder to receive education because of his social backround. It is similaray to a lesson be fore dying. Grant is a teacher and the only educated men.

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      #47
      I think you need afterhelp in English!

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        #48
        Curva Fiesole postete
        das is so schlecht weiss gar nicht wo ich anfangen soll

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          #49
          The film, "the Forrester place, is on the 16-year-old Afro-American Jamal Wallace, the OS that takes part in a private school and is confronted with prejudice against him. While in school he old author William Forrester helps the lifes in an apartment in the Bronx, the way back to find phases. In the film, which is jamal, is often confronted with racism as Jefferson in a lesson before dying. In Professor Crawford, Jamal's teachers at his private school, opinion, a black guy can not be as intelligent as Jamal, being in a private school. Just because Jamal is his teacher from the Bronx, set it over with racism. Similarly wishes Claire, the white girl and a friend of Jamal's, Dad does not want Claire and jamal are friends. He does not want to kiss, or they are merging. But check the film that a white guy and a black guy can be friends. William Forrester and Jamal share the same interest in reading and writing books. These two people can accept, and respect. Moreover, the value of training, he often part movie. To receive jamal be harder, training for its social backround. It is a lesson dying similaray front. Grant is a teacher and the only educated men.

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            #50
            Kevin Russell postete
            I think you need afterhelp in English!
            hab um keine falmes gebeten, idiot

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              #51
              @y0 Änderungen hab ich mal Fett makiert. Ich habe versucht möglichst viel von dem eigentlichen Text da zu lassen. Abgesehen von der Sprache ist der ganze Text ziemlich zusammenhanglos geschrieben. Aspekte werden maximal oberflächlich betrachtet und führen ohne erkennbare Überleitung zu anderen Punkten. Die Sprache ist nur ein Teilproblem. Grammatik war aber noch nie meine Stärke darum würde ich enthaltene Fehler nicht ausschließen.
              The movie "Finding Forrester" is about the 16-year-old afro american Jamal Wallace, who is attending a private school and is confronted with prejudices against him. While in school he helps the old author William Forrester, who lives in an apartment in the Bronx, to find his way back to normal life.

              In the movie Jamal is often confronted with racism, similar to Jefferson in "A Lesson Before Dying". Professor Crawford, Jamals teacher, has the opinion that black people like Jamal aren't intelligent enough to attend a private school.
              Solely because Jamal is from the Bronx his teacher faces him with racism. In the same way Claire, who is a white girl, is not allowed by her father to stay friends with Jamal. He does not want them to get too close to each other.
              However the movie verifies that white and a black can be friends. William Forrester and Jamal share the same interest in reading and writing books. These two people accept, tolerate and respect each other. Moreover the importance of education is one important aspect of the movie. For Jamal it's harder to receive education because of his social backround. It is comparable to "A Lesson Before Dying". Grant is a teacher and the only educated person. (Zusammenhang letzter Satz?)

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